剑桥雅思图表作文高分范文大PK
作为最经典的雅思复习资料，剑桥系列在作文部分一直以来都有一个重大的不足：范文不全-只有一部分的作文在书的最后部分提供了考官写的高分范文，相当一部分的topic后面只有考生写的，分数也各不相同的&参考文章&-大部份还都是低分&范文&。像剑6当中A类第二套试卷的小作文(剑6的52页)，很经典的一个table题，可惜后面只有一篇考生写的相当平庸的6分&范文&，明显缺乏学习研究的价值。在此Akata帮大家搜罗了两篇这个表格题的范文。
The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table indicates the number of miles by the average English person in 1985 and 2000, using various means of transport.
The number of miles walked, cycled and travelled by local bus all decreased. Of these, the number of miles travelled by local bus decreased the most, from 429 miles in 1985 to 274 miles in 2000.
The number of miles travelled by car, long distance bus, train and taxi all increased.
The number of miles driven by car was 3,199 in 1985 and rose by 50% to 4,806 in 2000. The number of miles travelled by long distance bus more than doubled from 54 miles(1985)to 124 miles (2000). The number of miles driven by taxi trebled from 13 miles(1985) to 42 miles (2000). The use of other, unspecified, forms of transport also increased.
Overall, the number of miles travelled by the average English person rose from 4,740 miles in 1985 to 6,475 miles in 2000, with the increase of cars accounting for almost all of that increase. (173 words)
The table demonstrates how different modes of travel changed in England in 15 years spanning from 1985 to 2000. In general, the modes are classified into two kinds in terms of average miles travelled per person per year: one enjoyed rising popularity while the other decreasing.
The travel modes which gained popularity in the period included cars, long distance buses, trains, taxis and others. Cars remained top among the modes in the 15 years, with its average miles increasing considerably from 3,199 in 1985 to 4,806 in 2000. Long distance buses and taxis seemed to be warmly welcomed by travelers, so average miles travelled in the two modes almost tripled.
Travels by walking, bicycles and local buses lost travelers& favor in the one and a half decade. Average travelling distance by local buses suffered the biggest decrease, dropping from 429 to 274, whilst the number of miles by walking and bikes fell mildly from 255 to 237 and from 51 to 41 respectively. Despite the decreases, however, the total miles travelled grew from 4,740 to 6,475.
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　　The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
　　Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
　　该柱状图显示的是年处于不同工作状态的男性和女性每周所享有的闲暇时光。这里所指的不同工作状态细分为全职、兼职、失业、退休和家庭主妇五大类。
　　The bar chart indicates the amount of leisure time per week that males and females of various employment statuses enjoyed over a one year period of time from 1998 to 1999. The employment statuses referred to here are grouped into five categories which are: employed full-time, part-time, unemployed, retired and housewives.
　　如图所示，在全职、失业和退休状态下，男性的休闲时间要比女性多，而在另外两个类别，即：兼职和作为纯家庭主妇的状态下，女性与男性毫无可比性，呈一支独秀状况。
　　As is indicated in the chart, under the backgrounds of being employed full-time, unemployed and retired, males had more leisure time to enjoy than females did. But with the other two statuses, namely, being employed part-time and being pure housewives, males had nothing to compare with females.
　　首先，我们看到失业与退休的男性与女性享受到的休闲时间最多。处于失业状态的两性群体分别有每周85小时和70小时的空余时光;而退休群体中，男性有84小时闲暇时间，女性有69小时。可以说在这两种状态下，男性与女性的闲暇时光相差甚微。
　　Firstly, unemployed and retired males and females enjoyed the greatest amount of leisure time. The average weekly leisure time enjoyed by males and females were 85 hours and 70 hours respectively. Among those who were retired, men had 84 hours while women had 69 hours. Generally speaking, males and females under these two statuses of employment showed very slight difference in terms of the amount of leisure time being enjoyed.
　　其次，对于全职工作者来讲，男性也比女性享有更多的闲暇时间，两者分别为45小时和37小时。
　　Secondly, for those who worked full-time, males also had more leisure time than females and the chart showed that males had 45 hours while women 37 hours.
　　再者，很有趣的一点是：家庭主妇类与男性无缘完全可以理解，但兼职状态下却只有女性，没有男性，这就难以令人理解了。不管怎样，我们看到的数据是兼职的女性每周有40小时的休闲时间，家庭主妇有50小时。
　　Thirdly, what is really interesting is that while it is totally understandable that the Housewives category had nothing to do with men, it was really hard to believe that the category of being employed part-time only involved females and no males. Whatsoever, the figure we see is 40 hours for part-time employed females and 50 hours for housewives.
　　总体而言，除了非常特别的两个群体外，男性比女性的休闲时间要多。
　　In general, apart from two very special groups, males had more leisure time to enjoy than females.
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　　以下是新东方在线在线为同学们整理的小作文流程图攻略及范文，供各位考生参考，希望能对大家有所帮助。 　　流程图 　　1.首段常用句子 　　The following diagraph shows the structure of&& 　　The picture illustrates&& 　　The whole procedure can be divided into&stages. 　　It mainly consists of&& 　　It works as follows. 　　It always involves following steps. 　　2.描述流程/过程的常用过渡性词语 　　
　　题目 1：玻璃的回收流程【单图】 　　
　　范文 1： 　　This diagram illustrates the recycling process of glass bottles. The whole
process is a cycle which can be divided into three main stages. 　　In the first stage, used bottles are collected at a recycling point ready
to be transported by a truck. The second stage starts in a cleaning plant, where
these recycled bottles are sorted by color into green, brown and clear ones and
washed by high-pressurized water. When the cleaning is done, the bottles are
conveyed to a glass factory where they are cut into glass pieces which are then
poured into a furnace. After being heated in the furnace, the broken glasses are
melted into liquid, which flows into a glass mold. Here glass liquid from other
sources is added and the molding process takes place. In the final stage, new,
empty bottles are filled with liquid, then packed and dispatched to the
supermarket ready to be picked by consumers. At this point, a cycle has been
completed and a new cycle will begin. 　　题目 2：蚕的生活史及丝绸服饰的生产流程【组图】 　　
　　范文 2： 　　【总述】The diagram illustrates the main stages in the life cycle of silkworm
and the procedure of silk cloth making.【两图关系】From this diagram it can be seen
that the cocoons are necessary raw materials used for silk cloth production. 　　【分述流程 1】In the first stage, eggs are produced by the moth and it takes ten
days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves. This
stage lasts for up to six weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread
around itself. After a period of about three weeks, the adult moths eventually
emerge from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again. 　　【分述流程 2】When it comes to the production of silk cloth, once the cocoons are
selected, they are boiled in water and the threads can be separated in the
unwinding stage. Each thread is between 300 and 900 meters long, which means
they can be twisted together, dyed and then used to produce cloth in the weaving
stage. 　　【小结】Overall, the diagrams show that the cocoon stage of the silkworm can be
used to produce silk cloth through a very simple process.
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